KET班英文寫作:Serves You Right  

KET班的孩子這次的作業挑戰是看圖寫故事,

從漫畫發想, 加入自己的有趣細節, 最後別忘了檢查邏輯和時間先後順序, 就成了一篇豐富又有趣的創作!

讓我們來欣賞同學的作品:

 

By Shannon, 就讀敦化國小六年級   Serves You Right 

     One day, Eil and I decided to play a trick on Julia. We put a disgusting frog in her desk. During math class, Julia opened the desk and the frog jumped out of her desk. She screamed in a high pitched sound and cried like a big baby. Mrs. Brown shouted, "Which of you rats put the frog in Julia's desk?" Nobody answered.   

     Mrs. Brown was furious, so she said, "Well, I guess the whole class will have to do math tests everyday until someone tells me who did it." I looked at Eli and Eli looked at me. Eli shook his head but I felt guilty, so I stood up and said "I put the frog in Julia's desk." And I realized that Eli didn't stand up. Mrs. Brown told me to go to the principal's office. The principal started asking me why I did that and some other stupid questions. I thought it wasn't fair at all, because while I'm getting told off, Eli's in the classroom doing his things.

     I had to write out fifty times "I will not put a frog in Julia's desk." I felt sad. But later that day, Eli imitated Mrs. Brown, and guess what? Mrs. Brown was right behind him. She had a really fake smile on and said "Well, well, look who it is, Mr. Eli." His face fell right away, and I was acting like an angel but I thought, "ha ha, you're in trouble now!" Mrs. Brown told him to go to the principal's office. After Mrs. Brown left, I said, "Serves you right!"

 

 

By Erin, 就讀敦化國小四年級      Serves You Right   

     One day, Sho and I decided to play a little joke on Christine. After a while, we decided to put a frog in her desk. So when class started, Mr. Rooney asked us to take out our maths book. When Christine opend her desk, she got the living daylights scared out of her. "Aaaaagh!" shrieked Christine. "What's going on?" Mr. Rooney asked." "Someone put a frog in my desk!" cried Christine. "Which of you dumbos put the frog in Christine's desk?" shouted Mr. Rooney. No one said anything. Eventually, Mr. Rooney got tired of waiting and said, " I'm going to count to three. When I do , I want the person who did it to stand up. If no one does, then no one will go home until we find the person who did it. Ready? One, two, three."

     I stood up. But Eli didn't. The reason I stood up was because I was afraid someone saw us and told Mr. Rooney. Then I would REALLY be in big trouble. "Erin," Mr. Rooney shook his head. "I'm ashamed of you. I want you to say sorry to Christine and head straight to the principal's office. Do you understand, young lady?" I sighed, then said "Yes, Mr. Rooney." I looked at Sho. He was smiling. Next I headed to the principal's office. And boy, he was MORE upset than Mr. Rooney. "How would you like if I put a frog in YOUR desk, huh? You should be ashamed. I will call your parents about this...." and just like that, he kept yelling at me for the next couple of hours. "This isn't fair," I thought. I wasn't the only one. Why isn't Sho here?"

     Later that day, things improved. Sho was imitating Mr. Rooney in the hallway. Then he laughed his head off. Lucky for me, Mr. Rooney was right behind him. He didn't see Mr. Rooney. "Sho," Mr. Rooney asked, "can you tell me what you are doing?" It was so funny Sho looked like he had just seen a ghost or something!" "Ha!" I thought. "You are in trouble!" Mr. Rooney sent Sho to the principal's office. "That serves you right!" I said happily.

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